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AMELBURY

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A comic about amateur superheroes in a city down under. https://balileart.neocities.org/

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AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · last wk.

Chapter 4, pg 115 and 116 #AMELBURY

three panel Amelbury webcomic page
p1) Suddenly, The Dropbear plunges down from the sky behind Ormer. Ormer's heart beats.
p2-3) The Dropbear spits something from his mouth as Ormer launches something from the staridium boot.

three panel Amelbury comic page
p1) the shot bounces off Dropbear's arm as he parries it
p2) A wet splat rings as whatever was spat hits Ormer in the eyes
p3) He falls over onto a skateboard while Dropbear reels in pain, gripping his arm.

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 2w ago

Chapter 4, pg 113 and 114 #AMELBURY

Four panel Amelbury comic

p1) Ormer pointing the boot at an unconscious Dropbear who is sat against a tree
p2-3) A closeup of the trunk Dropbear jumped from, it splits with a KRACK, and something spills out
p4) A wider shot now showing what had spilled out of the stump. Ormer is crouched over it, and the stump has various bags, books, a game console, a lighter, and a skateboard.
Ormer: "What's this?"

four panel Amelbury comic page
p1) a close-up of the various bits and bobs that came out of the tree.
p2) Ormer's face
Ormer: "Some junk?"
p3) Reversed camera shot, Ormer is surprised as the space where Dropbear was is now vacant.
p4) Ormer's eyes and nose, sweating nervous
Ormer, thinking: Where'd he go?

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 3w ago

Chapter 4, pg 111 and 112 #AMELBURY

Two page double spread splash page.
The art is one large panel with two sub panels, An explosion is rung out beneath the Dropbear, shrapnel flying at him he attempts to shield himself before being flung away, screaming.

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 4w ago

Heat Wave

pixel sketch of Ann and Ormer. Ann is sweating in the foreground and saying aloud, "Ormer buddy, I'm dying here..." in the background, Ormer is covered in ice packs and muffles, "There is no more Ormer, only ice..."

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 4w ago

Chapter 4, 109 and 110 #AMELBURY

four panel Amelbury comic page

p1) The Dropbear lands and flips after narrowly escaping impact from Ormer's attack.
p2-3) Landing gracefully, the Dropbear perches on the stump int he center of the clearing.
p4) A shot of Ormer holding the Staridium Boot up like a gun.
Dropbear: "Almost got me! With that, shoe... gun."

three panel Amelbury comic page.
p1-2) The Dropbear, still perched on the stump, strokes his beard upon the sight of the shiny metal boot in front of him.
p3) He now adjusts his hat, as if imagine another, nicer one to go on top of his head. The sounds of the boot whurring can be heard.
Dropbear: "What a nifty looking gadget, it's even made of some shiny metal! Must be worth quite the pretty penny!"
Dropbear (thinking): "Heheh when I take it from this kid, I might be able to afford a new hat! Just imagine how dashing I'll look while wearing it!"

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · last mo.

Chapter 4, 107 and 108 #AMELBURY

5 panel Amelbury comic page
p1) A shot showing Ormer looking down at the gym bag Ann has left on the ground.
p2-5) He rummages through the bag, taking out on of Ann's staridium boots and putting it on.
Ormer (thinking): "I hope she washes these..."

2 panel Amelbury comic page
p1) The Dropbear, is plucking leaves off of a twig he's holding. There's a sound that gets his attention of MMMMMRB.
p2) Something smashes into the branch as he leaps from it. The branch exploding beneath him.

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · last mo.

Chapter 4, 105 and 106 #AMELBURY

two panel Amelbury comic page
p1-2) The Dropbear catches himself with his heels on the branch he was falling off of. Using the momentum, he swings and kicks Ann in the face. below him, Ormer ducks out of the way just in time.

three panel Amelbury comic page.
p1) Ormer shouts down at a knocked down Ann. He's concerned for his friend while her assailant lands in the background.
Ormer: "Ann!"
p2) Dropbear turns his upper body backwards, striking a pose while pointing back.
Dropbear: "Oi lad, your friends got a nice arm there! (you understand I had to retaliate, right?"
p3) a closeup of Ormer with his hand covering his mouth. He's thinking deeply in this time of action.
Ormer thinking: He's not entirely wrong, but how am I gonna handle this alone?

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 2mo ago

Chapter 4, pg 103 and 104 #AMELBURY

two panel Amelbury comic page.

p1) Ormer and The Dropbear are posing at each other, The Dropbear pointing down at him from atop his branch.

Dropbear: "Now that you know of my story, Cower in F-"

p2) he is unceremoniously interrupted by a rock pelting him right in his face.

3 panel Amelbury comic page.

p1-3) It's shown that Ann is the one to have thrown the rock at The Dropbear. Ormer has a look of shock on his face, looking back at his friend. Their foe falling off his branch.
Ann: "... ... what."

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 2mo ago

Just so folks become aware, starting in Chapter 5, the numbering system will be changed to be the pages for each chapter rather than the total number of pages of the comic itself. That way, rather than it being "Chapter 4, pg 93 and 94" it would instead read "Chapter 4, pg 1 and 2".

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 2mo ago

Chapter 4, pg 101 and 102 #AMELBURY

a six panel Amelbury comic page

p1) an over the shoulder shot from behind The Dropbear, we see Ann placing her bag down while Ormer quips.
Ormer: "'Dropbear'? What you sleep 20 hours a day?"

p2-3) The Dropbear pointing down at Ormer with the next panel being his eyes basked in shadow while holding a hand in front of his face.
Dropbear: "You can jest all you like, but my origin is too dark and twisted for you to stomache."
p4-5) He looks down in silence, obviously expecting some sort of reaction. He then looks up to guage their reaction.
p6) Dropbear is now shouting up into the sky.
Dropbear: "When I was but a child,"

five panel Amelbury comic page
p1-5) A series of visuals describing the tale of the Dropbear's origin. The visuals are all whispy as if they aren't perfectly clear in their retelling of the story. It starts with an image of a family, a man, a woman, and a child. They stand in front of a building labeled 'Amelbury Zoo'. The next panel shows a little boy, presumably the Dropbear as a kid, holding a Koala while visibly nervous. Next we see the boy holding his arm crying while being led away by a parent. He has a tiny scratch on his arm while in the back is the visible look of a humanoid figure holding the Koala. Another panel just shows DNA strands before we finally see an abstract image showing the Dropbear as an adult among plants.
Dropbear: "My parents took me to the zoo as a 'birthday surprise!' Despite my protest, my parents made me participate in an animal meet and greet. While holding that vile beast it attacked me! And with that scratch... my genetics were forever changed, cursed with all the powers of the vicious koala!"

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 2mo ago

Chapter 4, pg 99 and 100 #AMELBURY

three panel Amelbury comic page
p1) Ormer staring dumbfounded at what he's witnessing
Ormer: "Uhhhhhhhhh..."
p2) the stranger swallows what he's eating with a gigantic gulp
p3) the camera's angle shows from behind the stranger in a forest. Ormer and Ann are below.
Ormer: "Did you just eat leaves?"
Stranger: "Aha! Two more marks have wandered into my forest!"

three panel Amelbury comic page.
p1) The man now stands on the branch he was on, bellowing down at the two of our heroes below.
stranger: "Now cower and flee! Fear the wrath of the Dropbear!"
p2-3) panels showing Ann and Ormer's faces as they react to the Dropbear's statement. Ann is clearly annoyed while Ormer gives a smirk of enjoyment.

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 2mo ago

Chapter 4, 97 and 98 #AMELBURY

4 page Amelbury comic
p1) a wide shot in a dutch angle. The camera looms over Ann's shoulder , Ormer standing confidently while leaves fall from above.
p2-3) A thought bubble above Ormer, whose imagining two men kissing while he blushes. He then waves his hand to clear up the thought.
Ormer: "It's also a spot where couple go to make out. But that shit's corny! So-"
p4) the angle changes again to now be from over Ormer's shoulder while he turns his head to look up and behind him. Ann is saying something, but is being interrupted by the loud rustling of something above them.
Ann: "I WAS gonna say that I get the STRANGE feeling we're being wa-"

3 panel Amelbury comic page
p1) we now see what ormer turned look up at. It appears to be some kind of man eating something from atop a tree branch. He sounds like he's eating veraciously while leaves and twigs fall below.
p2) Just Ormer's face looking in disgust.
p3) The man above turns to face us in surprise. He has two of his fingers in his mouth, clearly having enjoyed what he's been eating.

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 3mo ago

Chapter 4, pg 95 and 96 #AMELBURY

three panel Amelbury comic page
p1-3) various angles of Ann and Ormer still walking through this wooded trail. First one showing Ann in the foreground looking around while Ormer is further back. The second being a closeup of Ormer, and the third being a flat shot showing the two of them at similar distance from the camera.
Ann: "This is strange."
Ormer: "What's strange? Getting your boots appraised as 'alien' then being shoo'd away hastely?"
Ann: "What? No. Well yes? I mean this random trail on your campus."
Ormer: "I don't see what's so strange! We're just walking down a densely forested tunnel trail--"

page with two panels, the first being large and showing a shot from above on a clearing in the forest while the second is a closeup of Ann's face with a bit of surprise.
Ormer: "--And, at the center, opens up to a gorgeous-- Clearing! This area right here means we're halfway to the bus stop!"

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 3mo ago

Chapter 4, pg 93 and 94 #AMELBURY

a blank page except for a couple of sound effects going Crunch Crunch

a single panel page showing Ormer and Ann wandering down the wooded path. Ormer is further ahead and looking up wistfully while Ann is further behind and looking side to side as if something is off to her.

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 3mo ago

#AMELBURY Chapter 4 cover

cover art for Chapter 4 of the webcomic, AMELBURY. The art shows Ormer ducking in surprise as some assailant, with cheeks puffed up, is falling on top of him from above.

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 3mo ago

That's the end of Chapter 3 on here, but if you'd like to read further into Chapter 4, you can go to my website: balileart.neocities.org?pg=48#showCo...

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AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 3mo ago

Chapter 3, pg 88 and 89 #AMELBURY

a big splash page featuring Ormer and Ann going into a wooded area. Ormer's well ahead and enthusiastic while Ann is walking her normal gate.
Ormer: "Quick, this way!"

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 3mo ago

Chapter 3, pg 86 and 87 #AMELBURY

three panel comic page for Amelbury
1) Ormer and Ann are outside the lecture hall, walking away from it. Ormer is acting fruity while doing so
Ann: "I honestly thought she'd be more helpful."
2) Ormer bumps his elbow into Ann's side
Ormer: "I did too but, she did ask us to come back later at least!"
3) another shot, now with Ormer confidentally marching onwards and Ann looking up.
Ann: "Not really feeling your confidence, Ormer."

four panel amelbury comic page
1-2) Belly rumbling, Ann has her hand on her tummy before exclaiming
Ann: "Ugh..."
3) Ormer, noticing his friend's hunger, make a suggestionn
Ormer: "You ever been to Lil' Joey's?"
Ann: "Oh yes! I could kill some flapjacks right now!"
4) Now with a finger to his chin in a thinking expression, they both stop while Ormer thinks.
Ormer: "Uhhh... I remember there's a shortcut to the bus stop here that people take."

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 4mo ago

Chapter 3, pg 84 and 85 #AMELBURY

multi panel Amelbury comic page
1) Prime-Ape slides down one of the fireman's poles from the lecture hall of her alter ego. She is now in full costume
2-4) a couple of close ups of her touching her foot down oonto the ground before walking further into her Ape Cave.

two panel Amelbury comic page
1) a page showing Prime-Ape's face, lit up. She has a sad, serious face on her.
Prime-Ape: "Looks as though your suspicions are confirmed, old chum..."
2) a large panel of Prime-Ape using her mechanical arm tools to clack away at a keyboard. There are five screens above her, one showing a portion of Amelbury with a coastline area showing some kind of marker. the other screens show footage of the dock that Ann worked at, something falling out of the sky on fire, a screen filled with intelligible text, and finally a screen with various windows showing news articles.

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 4mo ago

Chapter 3, pg 83 and 84 #AMELBURY

a splash page that shows some sort of underground cave. there's various dated pieces of technology, a ladder up to some kind of catwalk, and an indent with two fireman poles.

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 4mo ago

Chapter 3, pg 81 and 82 #AMELBURY

four panel Amelbury comic page

1) a low angle shot from atop Oriana's desk. She's tucking her glasses into her pocket while a banana is visible from her desk.
2-3) A quick flick of her finger, and it is revealed the banana was actually fake and concealing a button. She pushes the button dramatically
4) with a WwRrrrrRRRrrr, the white boards in the lecture hall begin to rise mechanically up.

two panel Amelbury comic page
1) the wrring continues as the wall slowly slides up. behind it seems to be some kind of poles.
2) finally the wall stops sliding up. It stops with a metallic KLUNK.

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 4mo ago

Chapter 3, pg 79 and 80 #AMELBURY

two panel page
p1) A shot from above looking down at Ormer and Ann walking up the stairs of the lecture hall away from Professor Oriana Tang. She is at the bottom with her finger in the air.
Oriana: "Remember to close the door behind you! And be careful you two!"
p2) angle change to show from behind Oriana. her finger is still in the air and the two heroes are in the distance above her.
Oriana: "Who knows what evil is out there!"

six panel page
p1-3) an over the shoulder shot of Ann and Ormer finally reaching the door of the lecture hall, Ormer gives a quick wave goodbye before the door clicks behind him.
p4-5) we sit in silence for a moment while Oriana is now alone. She puts her fingers on the edge of her glasses
p6) Egads!? She pulls off her glasses to reveal that she was not in fact a regular human university professor, but instead an Orangutan the whole time?!?

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 4mo ago

Chapter 3, pg 77 and 78 #AMELBURY

4 panel Amelbury comic page
p1- a shot from above looking past the boot at Oriana, there's a sparkle as she is clearly in awe.
Oriana: "Fascinating..."
p2- another angle, Oriana now having the boot no longer above her head, and has Ormer and Ann in the background.
Oriana: "Where did you find this?"
Ormer: !
p3- just a shot of Ann's face. her eyes are to her right, looking in Ormer's direction.
Ann: "uh-"
p4- the camera is now pulled back to show Ann looking at Ormer who is sweating and grimacing while doing a rapid 'cut it out don't do that' hand motion.
Ann: "I found it?"

three panel comic page
p1- flat shot with all three in one panel. Ormer stops the hand waving while he stares at Oriana.
Oriana: "Is that so?"
p2- similar shot, but the professor is handing the boot to Ann.
Oriana: "Well here are your alien boots back."
p3- Oriana is waving her hand in a 'shoo' gesture while Ann and Ormer have a mildly annoyed expression.
Oriana: "I'm unfortunately very busy and must return to my lab, but please follow up with me later so we can run some tests!"

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 4mo ago

Chapter 3, pg 75 and 76 #AMELBURY

two panel Amelbury comic page
p1- Oriana and Ormer look down at the bag that Ann unzips
p2- A large panel with a couple mini panels showing Oriana's eyes light up upon seen what is in the bag. the larger panel then shows that it's Ann's boots inside.
Oriana: "Is that? Staridium?"

four panel Amelbury comic page..
p1- a flat shot of the three of them looking at one another
Ormer: "I don't know, you're the expert!"
p2-3- Oriana readjusting her glasses before picking up the boot to look at.
Oriana: "Mmyes, Let's see-"
p4- Another angle of Oriana analyzing the boot.
Oriana: "Well, judging by the unique metallic sheen of red... technical design of the body, it seems rather extraterrestrial."

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 5mo ago

Chapter 3, pg 73 and 74 #AMELBURY

Amelbury comic page comprised of 5 panels
p1- the Professor is tapping her papers on the desk while Ann and Ormer approach from behind.
p2- a shot of Ormer waving while Ann gives a neutral expression.
Ann: "yo."
p3- the professor has a look of surprise, obviously taken off guard
p4- She turns to face Ann and Ormer.
Professor: "Hello? You aren't any of my students."
Ormer: "Well actually, I used to be..."
p5- Ormer is looking a bit sheepish while the professor has a positive look of recognition on her face.
Ormer: "I'm Ormer."
Professor: "Oh yes! I remember! You dropped out of my class last semester!"
Ormer: (quietly) "That's me..."

4 panel Amelbury comic page
p1- the Professor has a big smile on her face as Ormer is obviously flustered at the bit of embarrassment he's experiencing in front of his new friend.
Professor: "And you weren't even failing if I remember correctl-"
Ormer: "WOW!! Have you met my friend, Ann, over here yet???"
Professor: "Hello! I'm Dr. Oriana Tang!"
p2-3- Ormer puts his index fingers together while Ann holds her gym bag up with one arm.
Ormer: "She has something to show you! Why don't you show her, Ann? Please?"
p4- Ann unceremoniously drops the heavy bag onto Oriana's desk with a loud CLUNK. the professor has a shocked expression.

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 5mo ago

Chapter 3, pg 71 and 72 #AMELBURY

two panel Amelbury comic page
p1- A wide shot from above, peering down on the orator. Ormer and Ann are in the foreground, now sitting in some seats.

Orator: The answer to that lies with Amelbury's most unique landform,, the giant fishbowl-like crater that encircles our city.

p2- the orator drawing on a white board, facing away from the viewer.
Orator: "It is commonly understood that some millennia ago, a meteor crashed into the coast of South Australia"

two panel comic page
p1- The orator, now facing the viewer, continues
Orator: "with it, came thousands of tonnes of staridium. A rich resource still yet to be uncovered to this day. Unfortunately, that's all the time we have for today,"

p2- camera angle shifts to be from over her shoulder, the students have already started filing out of the lecture hall. Ann and Ormer are on the steps heading towards her.

Orator: "Please remember your homework must be turned in by Friday!"

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 5mo ago

Chapter 3, pg 69 and 70 #AMELBURY

4 panel page for Amelbury
p1- Ormer and Ann are walking down the path while talking
Ann: "How'd they know the flakes tasted gross?"
Ormer: "One of the halfling actors mentioned in a behind the scenes interview that the fans they used would blast the fake snow right into his mouth!"
p2- closeup of Ormer with his hand outstretched in a fruity way
Ormer: "They had to reshoot that scene like six or seven times."
p3- closeup of Ann
Ann: "and reset the snow each time too?"
p4- Ormer and Ann have reached a door to a building. Ormer has his hands behind his head.
Ormer: "Yeah, that was also the only movie with snow. So I think they learned from the experience!"

4 panel comic page
p1- Ann has her hand on the door, ready to open in,, but she's looking back at Ormer.
Ann: "you sure they don't care if we just walk in?"
p2- she has now opened the door.
Ormer: "Positive!"
p3- the door closes with a click
p4- a wide shot of the inside of a lecture hall. there are rows of seats, sparsely populated while the orator is lecturing.
offscreen voice: "'How did this mineral get here?' you may ask--"

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 5mo ago

Chapter 3, pg 67 and 68 #AMELBURY

two page spanning splash page. the image is a wide shot of a campus, and Ormer and Ann walking along a path from a parking lot. Ormer is talking with Ann.
Ormer: "There's this one scene where the characters climbed up the side of a snowy mountain, and there's an avalanche so they had to build a whole set with fake snow made from these gross tiny salty flakes!"

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 6mo ago

Chapter 3, pg 65 and 66 #AMELBURY

4 panel comic page for Amelbury
p1- the tall student THUNKs against the ground from her friend knocking her over. Her friend's screams can be heard trailing off in the distance as she stares in horror above
p2- a shadow is cast over her as her face grows in horror
p3- a closeup of her face in fear as it's entirely covered in shadow
p4- all black panel

one panel comic page
p1- the tall student is seen in the distance, hands up, as she screams in fear and runs away. in the foreground are a bag, wallet, and skateboard that the two of them left behind.

AMELBURY @amelburycomic.bsky.social · 6mo ago

Chapter 3, pg 63 and 64 #AMELBURY

Amelbury comic page comprised of 4 panels

p1- Two university students running through a wooded trail while laughing
p2- a closeup of the shorter of the two
p3- the taller one obviously trailing behind, they begin panting from being winded
p4- the taller student now resting against a tree, she shouts, "W-wait up! I can't keep up!"

4 panel Amelbury comic page
p1- the taller one, now sweating, finally catches up with the shorter one. She puts her hand on their shoulder. She's still panting while they have a look of horror on their face from something off camera.
Taller student: "Good! Finally caught you--"
p2- closeup of the taller one as she looks down
Taller student: "What's wrong?"
p3- the taller student get a look of horror now on her face as she finally notices what the other was looking at.
p4- the shorter one begins screaming and ends up pushing into the taller one out of fear.