Cloe Axelson

@cloeax.bsky.social

senior editor of cognoscenti (@cogwbur), @wbur's essays and opinions page. mom of three girls, writer, runner, long-suffering cubs fan. "let's play two."

"As an aspiring female journalist, I saw Gloria Steinem point the way," writes Pulitzer winner Eileen McNamara. "I didn’t have to write for 'the women’s pages.' I could ask out loud why there even was such a section in the newspaper!" wbur.fm/4xCiTMW

Gloria Steinem pointed the way

"As an aspiring female journalist, I saw Gloria Steinem point the way," writes Pulitzer winner Eileen McNamara. "I didn’t have to write for 'the women’s pages.' I could ask out loud why there even was such a section in the newspaper!"

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Reading posts on X from Alpha School students (they are promoted on the Alpha account so seem to be real). This one seems particularly sad: "optimizing" paper writing by figuring out how to prompt for "solid thesis options" to finish before lunch. Why bother doing at all if not doing the thinking?

Someone in my morning session at @Alphaschool
 typed "give me essay ideas about Rome" into ChatGPT and gave up when it spit out textbook summaries.

The model only knows what you feed it. I dropped their sentence into our web optimizer, picked high school research paper as the target, and got back a structured prompt with 4 historical angles and source constraints.

They copied it, got 5 solid thesis options, and closed their laptop before lunch.

While they are conducting their research, I know some great people who could take an additional $10 million and figure out how to design some really wonderful writing assignments for students to complete without AI so that we can compare. Let us know if you know of any funders!

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“…the WRITE AI Center will lead a national effort to answer one of higher education’s most urgent questions: How can AI improve student learning while ensuring students continue to develop the writing, critical thinking and communication skills essential for success?”

ESSAY: "Dolly taught me that loving makeup and clothes and shoes and jewelry was okay — that I could be smart and creative and like the color pink," writes Heather Hach. "Being a buxom blonde and having writing chops aren't mutually exclusive.” wbur.fm/3UmCxxR

Dolly taught me how to be myself

"Dolly taught me that loving makeup and clothes and shoes and jewelry was okay — that I could be smart and creative and like the color pink," writes Heather Hach. "Being a buxom blonde and having writing chops aren't mutually exclusive."

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Commentary: "It seems it’s only a matter of time before U.S. soldiers are deployed against the American people," writes Navy veteran Andrew Carleen. "When that moment comes, I wonder what kind of moral courage will we see from uniformed leadership?"

We need our military leaders to show their moral courage

"It seems it’s only a matter of time before U.S. soldiers are deployed against the American people," writes Navy veteran Andrew Carleen. "When that moment comes, I wonder what kind of moral courage wi...

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Essay: Instinctively, with my toes covered in surf, I grabbed Sarah’s hand. And she grabbed back. The water taught me how to do that, to reach beyond worry to trust, and hold it in the palm of my hand, writes Libby DeLana, in this excerpt from her book, "Cold Joy."

Getting to calm. Getting to warm

Instinctively, with my toes covered in surf, I grabbed Sarah’s hand. And she grabbed back. The water taught me how to do that, to reach beyond worry to trust, and hold it in the palm of my hand, write...

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Doug Brown collects rare books on early America. But he recently acquired a desk that once belonged to Constance Miekevicz (nee Gore-Booth), an Irish revolutionary and suffragist. He was inspired by the story of her extraordinary life.

Why 'history is more thrilling than any romance'

Doug Brown collects rare books on early America. But he recently acquired a desk that once belonged to Constance Miekevicz (nee Gore-Booth), an Irish revolutionary and suffragist. He was inspired by t...

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Essay: Child psychologist Ellen Braaten often does media appearances, trying to reassure parents and kids in the wake of school shootings. She used to tell her audience that the adults in their lives do everything they can to keep them safe, but she doesn't say that anymore. We haven’t. We don’t.

The more I talk about gun violence, the less I have to say

Child psychologist Ellen Braaten wasn't an expert on gun violence when she received a call from a TV producer in the wake of the Sandy Hook tragedy. But I did know how to comfort and advise parents af...

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Essay: Kathy Gunst resisted tennis as a kid. Her parents were fanatics, and on principle, she decided the sport — and the country club — wasn't for her. Then she found the game again, on a public court, at 68.

I started playing tennis again. It's great, mostly

Kathy Gunst resisted tennis as a kid. Her parents were fanatics, and on principle, she decided the sport — and the country club — wasn't for her. Then she found the game again, on a public court, at 6...

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Commentary: While some organizations in Massachusetts work to simplify access to health care and solve for food insecurity, federal policy moves in the opposite direction, write Alister Martin and Annamarie Rapa.

New requirements make it harder for Americans who need help to get it

The One Big Beautiful Bill Act added work requirements and other administrative burdens for people seeking government benefits, write Alister Martin and Annamarie Rapp. These things sound reasonable i...

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