C.R. Neal-Author

@crneal.bsky.social

A writer and "retired" "artist". I am working on getting my most recent manuscript, a near-future, character-centric sci-fi drama called The Guardian Project, ready for querying.

#WIPSnips To be fair, I wouldn't be able to make direct eye contact with a shirtless Orion either. Though it's a view many might "appreciate", it sets a pretty awkward tone for conversation. #writingcommunity #writesky #amprocrastinating

“No problem,” She said quickly, still looking away, “But, um, I wanted to thank you again… for coming to the rescue earlier. I don’t know what I would have done if you didn’t show up.”
“I’m sure you wouldn’t have let Williams drown. It was nothing.”
“No, it was not nothing,” she countered. “I was struggling, and you came through for me― us, really. I feel like I owe you.”
“If anyone owes me, it’s Williams,” he thoughtlessly spat and then cleared his throat. “Really, it’s fine. Just watching out for the team.”
“I see that,” she smiled softly, eyes still averted, “And I appreciate you for it.”
He blinked at her as a pocket of tension seemed to ease in his chest at her words. She appreciated him. His mind went blank as he pried it for a response. An awkward silence stretched between them.
“Anyway,” she finally said, her voice elevated. “Team meeting in a couple hours.”
“I figured.”
“Right,” She clapped her hands together and rotated towards the stairs. “I’ll see you there.”
✨#WIPSnips✨ A Daily Writing Share Tag@wipsnips.bsky.social · 2y ago

Welcome to a new week of #WIPSnips! The first word for the new week and the last word for March is "appreciate" #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #WritingPrompts

#WIPSnips a bluesky writing community tag
March 31 - appreciate
Share a line from your WIP with the daily word for inspiration
Use #WIPSnips. Don't forget Alt Text for graphics
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The image behind the text is a border that is black with stars with a light blue rectangle highlighted by a fuchsia line. An illustrated caticorn holding a pencil and writing in a book with a rose behind one ear is in the lower right corner

Haunted by a violent past, ex-Federation pilot Orion Lorenz seeks redemption with Hyperion. Tasked with rebuilding a top-secret craft, he clashes with unorthodox engineer Kira Collier. With war raging, Orion must confront his inner demons or risk losing everything again. #Questpit #A #Q #SF

THE GUARDIAN PROJECT
A collage of 15 images: An assortment of papers, tools, a pen and calculator; a woman's bust, she has a messy braid over one shoulder, is wearing coveralls and has a resolute look on her face; a black jet flying through a dark cloudy sky; a long black fighter jet; an aircraft carrier in front of a large setting sun, a text image reading "we own you"; a sheet of blue plasma with sparks flying from it; the interior of an aircraft carrier hallway with pipes running along the ceiling; a dark-haired soldier sitting in the snow next to an icy river, his head is down looking sad; a text reading "I remember all of them"; a cobblestone path between stone buildings in Cyprus; a man with his face in his hand, one eye glaring intensely between his thumb and forefinger; a view from the inside of a jet cockpit flying towards a cloudy sunrise with a single-engine fighter jet flying in front of it; a large gray flying fighter jet front view; the torso of a soldier with a blue shirt and olive colored plated vest with many pouches, he has fingerless gloves on and is holding a rifle in one hand

Exiled engineer Kira Collier and battle-worn pilot Orion Lorenz join a diverse team to rebuild a stealth spacecraft. As tensions and trials rise, they must navigate trust, loss, and the morality of innovation, forging bonds that could mean survival—or destruction. #Questpit #A #Q #SF

A collage of 9 images. left to right and top to bottom: A large fighter jet, grey, flying head on with a gradient blue background. A sheet of blue plasma with sparks emitting from it, blue and orange. A sketch of a man with his face in his hand, one intense eyes glaring between his thumb and forefinger. A narrow,  lit hallway inside an aircraft carrier, pipes line the ceiling. A blue and green fractal pattern with superimposed text that reads: "The Guardian Project. A near-future science fiction novel. C.R. Neal". A building lined walkway in the Mediterranean, the buildings are brick with terracotta roofs and green vines stretch between them. The sketch of a woman with a pleasant face and thick braid over one shoulder, she is wearing a coverall uniform. Notepaper with engineering figures and equations, a yellow sticky notepad with a pen and some tools on a desktop. A second type of fighter jet from the side flying view, long, thin and black, with a speckled blue background.

If you've done much research into the "art" of the query letter, you may have noticed many (often conflicting) recommendations. However, if you look at some successful query samples, you’ll find many of them break a “rule” or two. A thread 🧵🪓 #writingcommunity #amquerying

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Alt: a purple cartoon character is giving a peace sign and has the word querying written above it

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Haunted by a violent past, ex-Federation pilot Orion Lorenz seeks redemption with Hyperion. Tasked with rebuilding a top-secret craft, he clashes with unorthodox engineer Kira Collier. With war raging, Orion must confront his inner demons or risk losing everything again. #YouDeservePit #A #Q #SF

THE GUARDIAN PROJECT
A collage of 15 images: An assortment of papers, tools, a pen and calculator; a woman's bust, she has a messy braid over one shoulder, is wearing coveralls and has a resolute look on her face; a black jet flying through a dark cloudy sky; a long black fighter jet; an aircraft carrier in front of a large setting sun, a text image reading "we own you"; a sheet of blue plasma with sparks flying from it; the interior of an aircraft carrier hallway with pipes running along the ceiling; a dark-haired soldier sitting in the snow next to an icy river, his head is down looking sad; a text reading "I remember all of them"; a cobblestone path between stone buildings in Cyprus; a man with his face in his hand, one eye glaring intensely between his thumb and forefinger; a view from the inside of a jet cockpit flying towards a cloudy sunrise with a single-engine fighter jet flying in front of it; a large gray flying fighter jet front view; the torso of a soldier with a blue shirt and olive colored plated vest with many pouches, he has fingerless gloves on and is holding a rifle in one hand

Disgraced aerospace engineer Kira Collier joins mercenary group Hyperion to rebuild a top-secret stealth craft amid war. As tensions rise with haunted pilot Orion Lorenz, Kira must lead, confront her past, and decide if saving their mission is worth the cost of her humanity. #YouDeservepIt #A #Q #SF

A collage of 15 images: An assortment of papers, tools, a pen and calculator; a woman's bust, she has a messy braid over one shoulder, is wearing coveralls and has a resolute look on her face; a black jet flying through a dark cloudy sky; a long black fighter jet; an aircraft carrier in front of a large setting sun, a text image reading "we own you"; a sheet of blue plasma with sparks flying from it; the interior of an aircraft carrier hallway with pipes running along the ceiling; a dark-haired soldier sitting in the snow next to an icy river, his head is down looking sad; a text reading "I remember all of them"; a cobblestone path between stone buildings in Cyprus; a man with his face in his hand, one eye glaring intensely between his thumb and forefinger; a view from the inside of a jet cockpit flying towards a cloudy sunrise with a single-engine fighter jet flying in front of it; a large grey flying fighter jet front view; the torso of a soldier with a blue shirt and olive colored plated vest with many pouches, he has fingerless gloves on and is holding a rifle in one hand

Exiled engineer Kira Collier and battle-worn pilot Orion Lorenz join with a diverse team to rebuild a stealth spacecraft. As tensions and trials rise, they must navigate trust, loss, and the morality of innovation, forging bonds that could mean survival—or destruction. #YouDeservepIt #A #Q #SF

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Taking some solace in the fact that, thanks to the absolute dipshit ignorance of bigots and by executive decree, everyone in the US is now female. We're also a couple hundred million lesbians richer than two days ago. Win.

#WIPSnips Some "division" of the team during crisis. Happy Caturday! Here's Rocky the Floofer in jail for his misdeeds(knocking over a child's block tower(I forgive him)). #writingcommunity #amwriting #writesky #caturday

“Right, the woman who single-handedly rebuilt a team immediately after the last one was all but wiped out,” Iseul threw a hand out emphatically, “Surely, she has no need to prioritize the mission and exploit any weaknesses towards that end.”
“What weaknesses?” He mirrored her movements.
“Do I really have to say it?” She groaned but continued anyway. “You’re pussy-whipped.”
Kira covered her mouth to stifle a choking laugh as Jack sputtered behind her. She wondered if he knew he was the reason Iseul was being so confrontational about all this. 
“Don’t talk about her like that,” Sam snapped.
“Oh, is that too crude for the little, sweet, Commander of a division-level force in a deadly mercenary group?” Iseul mocked, “We all know she fights the war with watercolors and kind words.”
“Jang, that’s enough.” His words came out through gritted teeth. 
“Pull your head out of your ass,” She snapped at him. “It’s not like you’re doing her any favors putting her on a pedestal. She’s an extremely powerful woman, and you just see your cute, innocent crush.”
A floofy grey and white cat licking his lips behind the bars of a chair. He's too cute for jail, he was released promptly.
✨#WIPSnips✨ A Daily Writing Share Tag@wipsnips.bsky.social · 2y ago

The #WIPSnips word for January 18 is "division" Happy Caturday! Would love to see some pet friends with your WIPSnips today if you'd like to share! (Doesn't have to be kitties, I'm just partial.) #WritingCommunity #WriteSky #WritingPrompts

#WIPSnips a bluesky writing community tag
January 18 - division
Share a line from your WIP with the daily word for inspiration
Use #WIPSnips. Don't forget Alt Text for graphics
Synonyms, variation and vibes are fine.
Support others on the #WIPSnips tag!
Hosted by rosie-j-potter.bsky.social

The image behind the text is a border that is black with stars with a light blue rectangle highlighted by a fuchsia line. An illustrated caticorn holding a pencil and writing in a book with a rose behind one ear is in the lower right corner

Exiled engineer Kira Collier and battle-scarred pilot Orion Lorenz join forces with a diverse team to rebuild a stealth spacecraft. As tensions and trials rise, they must navigate trust, loss, and the morality of innovation, forging bonds that could mean survival—or destruction. #P2Ppit #A #Q #SF

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Haunted by a violent past, ex-Federation pilot Orion Lorenz seeks redemption with Hyperion. Tasked with rebuilding a top-secret craft, he clashes with unorthodox engineer Kira Collier. With war raging, Orion must confront his inner demons or risk losing everything again. #P2Ppit #A #Q #SF #U

THE GUARDIAN PROJECT
A collage of 15 images: An assortment of papers, tools, a pen and calculator; a woman's bust, she has a messy braid over one shoulder, is wearing coveralls and has a resolute look on her face; a black jet flying through a dark cloudy sky; a long black fighter jet; an aircraft carrier in front of a large setting sun, a text image reading "we own you"; a sheet of blue plasma with sparks flying from it; the interior of an aircraft carrier hallway with pipes running along the ceiling; a dark-haired soldier sitting in the snow next to an icy river, his head is down looking sad; a text reading "I remember all of them"; a cobblestone path between stone buildings in Cyprus; a man with his face in his hand, one eye glaring intensely between his thumb and forefinger; a view from the inside of a jet cockpit flying towards a cloudy sunrise with a single-engine fighter jet flying in front of it; a large gray flying fighter jet front view; the torso of a soldier with a blue shirt and olive colored plated vest with many pouches, he has fingerless gloves on and is holding a rifle in one hand