Gideon Knight

@glknightwrites.bsky.social

Specializes in writing Fantastical Fiction. NOT AN ARTIST WIP: THE WITCH GUARD [WWI Dark Fantasy/Cosmic Horror], LOSTLANDS [Weird Pulp Fantasy] NSFW ACCOUNT: @gideonatknight.bsky.social https://gideonknight.carrd.co/

Made a bit of an announcement over on my SFW account, but I'm planning on fully rebooting THE NEO WAR SAGA to be more in line with what I want it to be while still taking a flame to the horrible shit that the Muscle Girl fetish scene lets slide in its content. 1st redesign? DESIREE NOWELL.

Gideon Knight@glknightwrites.bsky.social · 22h ago

A bit of a slip into my NSFW stuff. Got a story I'm thinking of rewriting called THE NEO WAR SAGA. Part Sci Fi Horror, part Cosmic Horror about interdimensional Aliens modding women into Alien Hybrid super soldiers to conquer Earth. Desiree is the 1st I want to redesign, then her MC bro Desmond.

Desiree Nowell from The Neo War Saga, the kid sister of the MC whose body was taken over by a White Alsarnian (the color all of the energy based aliens are born with before consuming enough lifeforce to evolve into other color forms). She's a tall and physically imposing woman in a red shirt and black pants with a freshly bleached white short hair style and glowing white irises.

As time has gone on (about 5 years now), I've had a lot of issues with this pic - Desiree is not meant to have big tits, her eyes are supposed to be black so that the energy crackling from her white irises stands out, she's supposed to have retractable black claws like all Neos are meant to have, etc.

The point is that Neos have this huge "body modding" element to them that's supposed to be reminiscent of plastic surgery except on a genetic level as they slowly convert human flesh into Neo Alsarnian living engines of destruction. They are purposefully meant to have an insane number of unfair advantages as they slowly become more alien in form. Some do go for the Plastic Surgery Slut look, but not Desiree. She's meant to be a purely "She will absolutely destroy you to protect others" kind of character, both build and personality. I fell the art in this pic actually betrays that idea.

Also yes, Neos have six fingers on each hand. Their grip strength is meant to be monstrous, which is why they need the extra finger for tactile control.

Also, all Neos are meant to have leathery blue palms with specific groove patterns that cause a unique suction like effect. Once they grab you, their insane strength handles the rest of the encounter essentially.

If you couldn't tell, I'm just going to keep talking about design flaws and how the artist who drew it didn't really listen to what I wanted with the pic if I don't stop here.

A bit of a slip into my NSFW stuff. Got a story I'm thinking of rewriting called THE NEO WAR SAGA. Part Sci Fi Horror, part Cosmic Horror about interdimensional Aliens modding women into Alien Hybrid super soldiers to conquer Earth. Desiree is the 1st I want to redesign, then her MC bro Desmond.

Desiree Nowell from The Neo War Saga, the kid sister of the MC whose body was taken over by a White Alsarnian (the color all of the energy based aliens are born with before consuming enough lifeforce to evolve into other color forms). She's a tall and physically imposing woman in a red shirt and black pants with a freshly bleached white short hair style and glowing white irises.

As time has gone on (about 5 years now), I've had a lot of issues with this pic - Desiree is not meant to have big tits, her eyes are supposed to be black so that the energy crackling from her white irises stands out, she's supposed to have retractable black claws like all Neos are meant to have, etc.

The point is that Neos have this huge "body modding" element to them that's supposed to be reminiscent of plastic surgery except on a genetic level as they slowly convert human flesh into Neo Alsarnian living engines of destruction. They are purposefully meant to have an insane number of unfair advantages as they slowly become more alien in form. Some do go for the Plastic Surgery Slut look, but not Desiree. She's meant to be a purely "She will absolutely destroy you to protect others" kind of character, both build and personality. I fell the art in this pic actually betrays that idea.

Also yes, Neos have six fingers on each hand. Their grip strength is meant to be monstrous, which is why they need the extra finger for tactile control.

Also, all Neos are meant to have leathery blue palms with specific groove patterns that cause a unique suction like effect. Once they grab you, their insane strength handles the rest of the encounter essentially.

If you couldn't tell, I'm just going to keep talking about design flaws and how the artist who drew it didn't really listen to what I wanted with the pic if I don't stop here.

A bit of a slip into my NSFW stuff. Got a story I'm thinking of rewriting called THE NEO WAR SAGA. Part Sci Fi Horror, part Cosmic Horror about interdimensional Aliens modding women into Alien Hybrid super soldiers to conquer Earth. Desiree is the 1st I want to redesign, then her MC bro Desmond.

Desiree Nowell from The Neo War Saga, the kid sister of the MC whose body was taken over by a White Alsarnian (the color all of the energy based aliens are born with before consuming enough lifeforce to evolve into other color forms). She's a tall and physically imposing woman in a red shirt and black pants with a freshly bleached white short hair style and glowing white irises.

As time has gone on (about 5 years now), I've had a lot of issues with this pic - Desiree is not meant to have big tits, her eyes are supposed to be black so that the energy crackling from her white irises stands out, she's supposed to have retractable black claws like all Neos are meant to have, etc.

The point is that Neos have this huge "body modding" element to them that's supposed to be reminiscent of plastic surgery except on a genetic level as they slowly convert human flesh into Neo Alsarnian living engines of destruction. They are purposefully meant to have an insane number of unfair advantages as they slowly become more alien in form. Some do go for the Plastic Surgery Slut look, but not Desiree. She's meant to be a purely "She will absolutely destroy you to protect others" kind of character, both build and personality. I fell the art in this pic actually betrays that idea.

Also yes, Neos have six fingers on each hand. Their grip strength is meant to be monstrous, which is why they need the extra finger for tactile control.

Also, all Neos are meant to have leathery blue palms with specific groove patterns that cause a unique suction like effect. Once they grab you, their insane strength handles the rest of the encounter essentially.

If you couldn't tell, I'm just going to keep talking about design flaws and how the artist who drew it didn't really listen to what I wanted with the pic if I don't stop here.

Okay, so it's looking like I have to wait another month to either -Order some flavored caffeine powder that's sugar free in flavors I like *Or* -Commission art to try and push my career forward ...Having a budget of 100 USD a month is a pain in the ass.

Sounds like "darkrob13" is just a shitty Dungeonmaster who doesn't prepare for his games. Also, you're willing to pay for the books, which take time and effort and actual work to go into them, but not pay for art? Robby Boo Boo there is a Grade S Dumbass, plain and simple.

Gretchen Felker-Martin PRE ORDER CHIMERA 2.16.27 🍉@scumbelievable.bsky.social · 2d ago

"I'm entitled to whatever I want whenever I want it for any reason and I don't care what satisfying these urges does to me or the world" well okay dude, seems like there's something deeper going on here, but that's just my take

Plotting the next installment of Island Of The Primal. Neesa puts William into a bed before heading to the Medical section to look for supplies. When she doesn't find any, she heads to the Lab. It's here she finds notes leading to plot - spontaneous adaptation, mutations and primal muscle growth.