What's interesting about this is that I think I could find plenty of people who would believe this is BAD scientific writing, for exactly the same reason I think it's GOOD scientific writing: it's interesting, engaging, and fun (while still being clear).
good scientific writing alert "In the Hawaiian honeycreepers, the progression “rule” is more of a polite suggestion" from nice new paper on Hawaiian honeycreeper phylogeny www.pnas.org/doi/10.1073/...