Finding Gravity by Andrea Homoya @andreahomoya.bsky.social (Adult Contemporary) #RevPitShowcase reviseresub.com/showcase/fin...
Finding Gravity
by Andrea Homoya (@andreahomoya.bsky.social) Adult Contemporary
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Nicole Frail, Book Editor
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Nicole Frail Edits, LLC www.nicolefrailedits.com Publisher, @nicolefrailbooks.bsky.social www.nicolefrailbooks.com #RevPit Editor & Board Member 16 Years Fiction & Nonfiction Experience (Adult & Kidlit)
Finding Gravity by Andrea Homoya @andreahomoya.bsky.social (Adult Contemporary) #RevPitShowcase reviseresub.com/showcase/fin...
Finding Gravity
by Andrea Homoya (@andreahomoya.bsky.social) Adult Contemporary
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I can describe my novel's hook a million different ways, but if you want to know how it *feels*, these songs paint a picture of Phoebe's emotional journey. Also, it's got some real bangers. More at the link. open.spotify.com/playlist/4wP... #amquerying #writingcommunity #revpit
One week until the #revpit 2026 Showcase goes live!! Bookmark www.reviseresub.com and return to it on Monday, June 8! #booksky #amquerying
Heyyyy friends, who's looking forward to the #revpit showcase next week? I had a great time reworking FINDING GRAVITY with @nicolefrailedits.bsky.social, and I can't wait to share it with you all! #writingcommunity #amquerying #contemporaryfiction
There are three types of voice in writing: author, narrator, and character. Author voice = writing style Narrator voice = the voice telling the story (i.e. POV) Character voice = the way your character thinks and speaks #WritingCommunity #AuthorServices #AuthorCommunity #Editor
⛅Coming Soon!⛅ When You Know, You Know by Caroline Baccene Sun, secrets, and second chances . . . The stranger from her worst night may just become the one person who can change everything. #romancelandia #newreleases #smallpress #quickreads
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The dust settles on #RevPit And I find out my manuscript DESERT STARS was featured on @nicolefrailedits.bsky.social 's #10queries AND longlisted :) Nicole's feedback on my work was v helpful, so I recommend using that RevPit discount and getting some feedback on your materials ;)
Winner (2 of 2) of the first ever Cover Story writing contest! Congrats to @bmbriar.bsky.social and SO BEATS A HOLLOW HEART! This novella is available to preorder now and will release on August 18 through @attic-ebooks.bsky.social
SURPRISE! 🏕️ Camp Query Bootcamp is coming April 27th! We're running a 5-day deep dive into everything querying (query letters, synopses, hooks, comps, and more). But we also want YOUR questions! Submit your questions here and we'll work them into the bootcamp content: forms.gle/j2QHMe1wXBz7...
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#CampRevPit doesn't just happen—it's powered by an incredible team! Behind the scenes, a stellar group of #RevPit alums and runner-ups is keeping the campfires burning and the energy high. Say hi to the wonderful crew! ⬇️
My #revpit #10queries emails have officially gone out! If you've been waiting to hear from me, please check your emails. :)
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If you're in the Scranton, PA, area and interested in discussing the use of AI in publishing and advertising, stop by the University of Scranton tonight! Networking starts at 5:30, panel starts at 6:30.
Part 2 starts here. Didn't realize it was going to be such a challenge to find among the replies. 😅
Q11 A H Definitely something I’d read for funsies. QL needs a bit of rearranging, just moving the paragraphs around to allow the reader to fully understand the story and vibes. Bio looks good, and I appreciate that the humor alluded to stretches to the bio para, too. Good work! #revpit #10queries
Annnnnd we’re back with my second (and final) #revpit #10queries batch to keep it all together! I’m continuing with this thread (below), so look for Q11 as a reply to Q10. Please review the notes at the top if needed.
Yay! #RevPit #10Queries time! Some notes before we start: - These were mostly randomly selected. I tried to get a good balance of adult and kidlit, but for the most part, I just clicked and picked.
Congrats, @amyheppstories.bsky.social! Can't wait to share your story with readers! #smallpress #shortfiction #romancelandia #writingcontest
Winner (1 of 2) of the first ever Cover Story writing contest! Congrats to @amyheppstories.bsky.social and NORTHERN BLUES! This quick read is available to preorder now and will release on June 2 through @attic-ebooks.bsky.social.
Join me today at 2(e) for QL 11-20! :) #revpit #10queries
Today is the final day for #RevPit #10Queries! If you missed any of them, make sure you're signed up for our newsletter so you'll get the links to ALL of the threads once we wrap up! #RevPitWaiting will continue this weekend, and our winners will be announced MONDAY!!
Yay! #RevPit #10Queries time! Some notes before we start: - These were mostly randomly selected. I tried to get a good balance of adult and kidlit, but for the most part, I just clicked and picked.
The current plan is 2 p.m. for my first set of #10queries. Will post if that changes for any reason! ✌🏼
We have FOUR editors going live this afternoon and evening with their #revpit #10Queries threads! Please tune in to: @nicolefrailedits.bsky.social at 2 pm @fromcarly.bsky.social at 3 pm @raqueledits.bsky.social at 6 pm @leahrambadt.bsky.social at 7pm *All ET
You have until midnight tonight to help choose the finalists for the #RevPit title bracket! I Still Dream in Indigo vs. Macarons and Monsters: forms.gle/3pX3PRsiY2Wm... Maybe Today, Satan vs. The Tide Calls for Traitors: forms.gle/2TWczciEh63Z... #RevPitBracket2026
I think... I should *finally* be ready for my first #revpit #10queries session tomorrow! Time TBD, based on how many sick kids I have home with me. 😅
Partnerships have been announced for the 2026 #RevPit BIPOC Editor Mentorship! Mentor: Demi Michelle Schwartz Mentee: Kai Benson Mentor: Madelyn Knecht Mentee: Margaux Yiu Mentor: Raquel Brown Mentee: Noelle Upton Mentor: Ash P. Mentee: LaDonna Praise
Me finally looking at my #RevPit subs. I don't even know where to start!! 👀👀
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When you ask a BETA reader to focus in on traumatic content, if they tell you they wanted to put it down and not read on. LISTEN TO THEM. What you need in a therapeutic way by writing your content is NOT the same as what readers need. Get rid of DNF content. #writingcommunity #booksky
From a strictly sales (dept) & metadata perspective, MG ends at 12 (end of 6th grade), YA starts at 12 (start of 7th grade). So (1) the age of the MC. Then there are the (2) Themes: YA may introduce more romance, striving for independence 1/2 #revpit #askeditor
What makes something "upper MG" Or "lower YA" (both vs their usual)? I know there is no simple answer, but I’m trying to figure this out.
I'm most excited about the manuscripts that have great bones but just need to be pushed further. The story works, and I have a million ideas to fill holes or help arcs. If I'm confident in what I can do for an MS going in, it makes the editing process more enjoyable. #askeditor #revpit
Hi Nicole, hope your kiddos feel better soon! What’s one thing that really grabs your attention and makes you excited to edit a book when reading?
When backstory becomes necessary to begin to understand the MC's position or decision, then it becomes important to the reader. Anything before that may be glazed over, may overwhelm, or may slow the story. #revpit #AskEditor
At what point should we start sprinkling in the backstory for our MCs?
#revpit #askeditor When you have agent rep already, it becomes teamwork. They want your book to sell just as much as you do, since that's how they'll be paid. They'll be making decisions based on long-term plans they have for you, too. It's not just about that one book. 1/3
Hi Nicole!!! What are the major differences between going on submission for an agent and going on sub with an agent? Also, are you familiar with how taxes work in regards to a paid author (or one who receives an advance etc.)?