I started working on a new sci-fi project that I don't hate. The co-star is a rabbit.
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Shy Alon
@shy-alon.bsky.social
Author of speculative & medical thrillers 🧬 Querying my debut | #QuestPit Gym rat • tech survivor • dad
I started working on a new sci-fi project that I don't hate. The co-star is a rabbit.
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Finished reading Fight Club. If you're one of those weirdoes who enjoy their sanity, I would not recommend. Otherwise ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ www.goodreads.com/book/show/36... #booksky
So, how do I find critique partners? (I'm not even going to mention the β word, to avoid the onslaught of AI assisted paid readers). #writingcommunity
Looking for beta readers and critique partners for The Idun Variant: • Adult speculative medical thriller • Single POV • Domestic drama + ethical horror • Near-future biotech • 80,000 words #A #SF #T #M #ABCPit
Hello campers! We hope you had a great time at #CampRevPit! After answering your own cabin prompt, come sit by the fire, and pitch your project for our mini mixer #ABCPit event! Be sure to tag if you're seeking alpha readers, beta readers, or critique partners. 🏕️ We're excited for your stories! 👀
I honestly don't know. Writing has always been a hobby for me, and (forgive my arrogance) I surprised myself with a book I believe is worthy of publishing. I don't know how and how well I fit in the publishing eco-system, if at all. #CampRevPit #CRPfireflies
Happy last day of #CampRevPit! I've had a great time being your counselor! Thank you for replying to my (sometimes silly) prompts.❤️ Today's #CRPfireflies prompt: What's the plan for your project once it's finished (and/or edited)? Querying? Self-pub? Unsure? (For more fun, check out #ABCPit next!)
#ShoutOut to everyone who participated in #CampRevPit, and a warm thank you to my #CRPfireflies counselor @arumiwrites.bsky.social and the crew.
Good morning, Campers! 🏕️ #CampRevPit is coming to an end soon. We hope you had lots of fun, met new friends and put down some words! On the last day of camp, #ShoutOut a writer friend who's inspired you, helped you along your journey, or just been a great Camp buddy. 👏
1. Like my previous speculative books, the technology was published in a scientific journal while I was still revising. 2. The sexy self centered yoga instructor character is based on a real person, whom I no longer speak with. 3. I Fully understand the science in the story. #CampRevPit
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Good morning, #CampRevPit! 🏕️ Tuesday is #CampTrivia time! Post 3 weird facts about your WIP: 2 truths, 1 lie. Let us guess the fake.
Agent’s guide to THE IDUN VARIANT: • Adult speculative medical thriller • Single POV • Domestic drama + ethical horror • Near-future (almost here) biotech • 80,000 words • Standalone with series potential #CampRevPit #CRPfireflies
Happy Monday, #CRPfireflies! Imagine that an agent sees your quote-tweet of this post, and you have one tweet to pitch your book to them. What do you share? This can be a pitch, an agent guide, a playlist, a banger line, or a combination. Don't forget to use our cabin hashtag! ✨ #CampRevPit
When it's time to act, Adrian does... Nothing... At least until his back is against the wall. #CampRevPit #CharacterFlaw
Happy Saturday, #CampRevPit! 🏕️ Who doesn't love a beautifully imperfect character? Tell us more about your #CharacterFlaw. What is your MC’s biggest flaw, and how does it derail them?
Well, it's definitely a moment: #CRPBeeMine #CampRevPit #CRPCabinRaids
In your WIP, share the moment your love interest goes from familiar to wait… oh 👀 #CRPBeeMine #CampRevPit 🐝 ‼️💥 CABIN RAIDS!!!! Ready for a weekend of chaos? Sneak over to at least one different cabin and answer their prompt, tagging #CRPCabinRaids
Immortality with no catch and no strings attached! Scientists respecting rules and regulations down to the letter! Mentor and protégé totally respecting each other's boundries and acting professionally! #CRPCabinRaids #CampRevPit #CRPSparkleSkunks #CRPfireflies
Hello #CampRevPit #CRPSparkleSkunks! We've made it to the weekend! I hope you all still have a nice reserve of snacks, flashlight batteries, and your favorite writing drink! Today's prompt is about tropes! Also, check out @reviseresub.bsky.social 's post about #CRPCabinRaids! Have fun!
Well, #CRPCabinRaids #CRPFantasyFoxes
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Let’s fancast your WIP for today's Discussion Den, #CRPFantasyFoxes! Drop a gif or photo of who might play your MC and/or the villain in the movie of your book! Then give us a description of the vibes you're going for with this character so we can really picture that actor in the role!
As Adrian, probably Idris Elba. As old Tessa, Dame Judi Dench. As young Tessa... That's a tough one. Maybe Sydney Sweeney? #CRPCabinRaids #CRPNightcrawlers
Happy Saturday, #CRPNightcrawlers! You know what that means.... CABIN RAIDS!!!! Ready for a weekend of chaos? Sneak over to at least one different cabin and answer their prompt, tagging #CRPCabinRaids
Adrian has the patience of a saint. Tessa, on the other hand, would snap like a twig even before the elevator stopped. Professor Magnus is not one for wasted time. #CRPfireflies
Congratulations on making it to Friday, #CRPfireflies! For today's cabin #CampRevPit prompt: Choose two of your characters to get stuck in an elevator. Who snaps first? 👀
I forced myself to return to my WIP. Literally forced myself. For multiple reasons, I didn't have the energy to write for a while now. Since this morning, I revised two chapters.
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Adrian is alarmed when Tessa doesn't remember her wife Dawn. He's horrified that she doesn't care Dawn killed herself, and is more horrified still when Tessa dives straight back into their research with the ambulance still parked in their back yard.
Happy Time Zone #CRPfireflies! To follow up on today's earlier #CampRevPit prompt, share a bit about your antagonist or the main antagonistic forces in your story. Is there a moment when the antagonist (or antagonistic forces) seem to succeed? What happens to your MC?
"Are your childhood memories so important? Who cares about your honeymoon, the birth of your child, or their graduation ceremony? You live now. Strive for perfection now. And if someone cares for you, and they matter, they matter now. They have to." #VillainVoices #CampRevPit #CRPfireflies
Good morning, #CampRevPit! 🏕️ Today, we give your villains a moment in the spotlight. What would they say your story is about? Pitch it from your villain's perspective. #VillainVoices
Oh, the generations gaps are starting to show... I'll give it a shot anyway. Story: 👵🏽💉🏥🤒💔❤️🩹✝️👩🦽💪🚶♀️☕🧘♀️🔬💰📚👱♀️⚰️💋👩❤️👨💀 MC: 💉😨🏥💀🦆🦆📚🔨🧘♀️☕⚱️💋❤️🧪☠️👼 #CampRevPit, #CRPfireflies!
Congratulations on making it to Day 3 of #CampRevPit, #CRPfireflies! For a fun prompt today: describe your story with emojis! (Bonus: Also do this for your main character's arc) Here's mine: Story: 😱🎱🌲🐔😡🥺🔥☺️ MC: 🫥🤔😡😳🤔😔😌🥰
“The virus is working! It’s saving her! That’s why her fever was up!” Adrian growled at her as he persisted in his efforts. “Help me. You’re her doctor for crying out loud! You swore a fucking oath!” #OneLineMC
Good morning, #CampRevPit! 🏕️Let's start the day with your main character! Use #OneLineMC and share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC’s personality.
Adrian's greatest strength is his heart. He fosters hope when all seems lost. He believes in the people surrounding him and their good intentions. He genuinely wants to help, and it shows. Adrian's greatest weakness is, well, his heart. He's easily manipulated and lets others get to him.
Happy Day 2 of #CampRevPit, #CRPfireflies! For today's cabin prompt, tell us a bit about your MC - what's their greatest strength? What's their greatest weakness? (Bonus question: How do these strengths/weaknesses affect their journey throughout your book?)
I mean, I think it's fully cooked, but my readers don't agree...
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I didn't choose my genre. My genre chose me. I wanted to write science fiction and fantasy. That was what I read since I was a kid, climbing on the shelves of my father's library, picking Asimov from all the way up. But when I started writing, it was just today with a twist. What if... #CRPfireflies
Happy Time Zone #CRPfireflies, and welcome to another year of #CampRevPit! I can't wait to get started! Our first icebreaker: quote this post with what you love most about your genre, and what you'll be working on during camp. Don't forget to use our hashtag! ( #CRPfireflies )
As a data guy, I know the inherent issues of working with partial data. There are inherent biases, flawed relations and false assumptions. Still, this is the best I've got (I'd love more data). Here is my #RevPit winners analysis:
It's not that I feel bad about losing (not winning) #RevPit, it's about belonging. Or rather, not belonging. Goodbye, fellow revpitters, and congrats to the winners.
A weird thank you. I started writing a few years ago and the most supportive community I've found was on Twitter. We had writing rooms. We did sprints. We read each other's premature stuff. About three years ago, they all scattered to the wind. Gone in a single day. Thanks guys, wherever you are.
#RevPitWaiting for Saturday, April 11: Is there anyone you’d like to thank? Someone who made #RevPitWaiting better? Who helped you get to today?
Writing well never came easy to me (arguably it still doesn't). Out of the books on writing I've read (quite a few, most fairly good) this one stands out. Clear, concise, and down to earth, a perfect mix of theory and practice. I couldn't recommend it enough. www.ursulakleguin.com/steering-the...
So sorry, everyone! Buffer didn't post this today and we didn't know! #RevPitWaiting for Thursday, 4/9: What are your fav craft books? Resources that helped you improve? Let’s help each other be better writers!
It depends on my stress levels. If I'm relatively stress free - I'm pantsing the hell out of my book. Lately I've only been plotting 🥹
#RevPitWaiting for Wednesday, 4/8: Tell us a little about your writing process! Do you discovery write, plan every detail, or a mix of the two?
My protagonist's flaw is that he has no agency. Let's see how we'll that goes through edits... #writingcommunity