They-Ra

@xanindigo.bsky.social

poet, author, astrophysicist, supervillain 💛🤍💜🖤 small, but great in mischief

i don’t think we talk enough about the audacity of america taking the word tomahawk from the people it colonised and using the name for missiles it uses when colonising elsewhere

i miss when internet people would make their own gifs, instead of just clicking a button and choosing a poorly made, badly encoded one that someone added to a library a decade ago

so let me get this straight. some people wanted eggs to be cheaper and were mad about all five trans women in sports and now america’s considering a military draft to go and commit more war crimes in west asia?

wild about fuel prices rising like that. if only we'd all decided a decade ago to try and reduce our reliance on fossil fuels. like a set of agreements. perhaps made in paris. pity we didn't do that.

in an age of AI bullshit, it's now hard to fully trust any videos that say they're from a war zone. the party no longer needs to tell us to reject the evidence of our eyes and ears. we can no longer trust them ourselves.

I'd add that your sentences, carefully written, will work in concert with each other. Longer sentences will help your writing flow, making it feel smoother and more comfortable to read. Short ones give sharpness. You need both. The presence of one will emphasise the other.

Joanne Harris@joannechocolat.bsky.social · 5mo ago

Unsolicited writing advice, no. 3290126: Vary the lengths of your sentences. Short sentences create impact. Longer ones are for when you want to introduce a lyrical note. Don't make them too long, though; it can be confusing, and your audiobook reader needs to breathe...