Started a new story tonight! Middle grade first person past tense sci-fi kids-on-bikes story set in space. 1,038 words so far! It’s good to be doing some sci-fi again.
Matt DeBarth
@korivak.bsky.social
Amateur writer, librarian, parent, and Oxford comma user. Mostly Canadian. All people count as people. Human-made art for humans; GenAI never. Every billionaire is a policy failure; every trillionaire is a thousand policy failures.
LLMs are the text equivalent of putting googly eyes on a vacuum cleaner.
For the first part of the story, before the genre shifts to a more conventional overland fantasy quest, my story starts out as a hide-something-fantastic-from-your-family-and-friends kids’ story. Ela is keeping the baby dragon in the hen house secret. #WIPSnips
Here's a #WIPSnip game! Show a snippet of your MC lying or being lied to... I'll start!
So many options, since my book is about a water dragon and his human protector, living on the coast, making deals with water spirits, following streams uphill into the forest, on a quest to cast the dragon back into the freshwater lake from whence he was hatched. Here’s an early line. #WIPSnips
Welcome to a new week of #WIPSnips! The word for June 29th is "water" #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #WritingPrompts
Talked to Newsweek about why voters are against data centers, and I think this mostly sums it up: www.newsweek.com/cost-me-the-...
I have almost exclusively written fairly hard sci-fi for adults (not much romance; plenty of swears), but I’m currently writing a middle grade fantasy specifically to have something to share with my own children and my students at work (younger than YA; power of friendship; no swears). #JuneJottings
Welcome to #JuneJottings Day 25! Bit of a marketing question. What age range, gender (if at all), community are you writing for or will be marketing your book for? #WritingPrompts #WritingCommunity #WritingPrompt #AmWriting #WriteSky #WritersCommunity
Stay Writing While the Sun is Shining! “Borrowing” an idea I saw recently: tease your story with five emojis. Mine would be 👩🌾💧🐉🥾🌳 Remember to use alt text, be curious, be kind, and use Oxford commas. #SummerSnips
Oh, that’s not good. Can’t run a consumer economy when people can’t even afford to consume. We get one trillionaire, and already the wheels are about to come off the whole thing. Furthermore, I think that Loblaws must be nationalized.
“.. Real disposable income (aka the money in our pocket after taxes & inflation) was flat (0% y/y) while consumer spending is up 2.1% y/y. “.. More & more are dipping into savings, using credit & leveraging wealth.” @gregdaco.bsky.social
Okay, so I don’t explicitly call it a pair of pyramids, but close enough. From “The Admiral and The Captain”, my milscifi retelling of the old “battleship and lighthouse” joke. It’s published, but I also want to edit it more, so it’s kind of a #WIPSnips
The #WIPSnips word for June 25th is "pyramid" #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #WritingPrompts
Don’t know what’s worse, the fact that we invented a new, vastly more expensive way to accomplish a simple task that was already solved, or the fact that even while grossly overcharging people for this “service” AI is still incredibly unprofitable.
Leaked audio from Accenture says a big source of AI token ‘chewing’ is people just converting PDFs to presentation slides.
Stay Writing While the Sun is Shining! #SummerSnips Wednesday’s snip is full of woe! Snip a setback, upset, or Remember to use alt text, and be curious and kind.
I’m going from the wild discovery writing draft stage of unconnected “fun bits” to a more methodical and continuous rewrite, and writing the lead up to the start of the big adventure is very vegetables-before-dessert. There’s important character, stakes, and plot stuff I need to have. #JuneJottings
Hot hot hot Day 24 for #JuneJottings 🔥🔥🥵 Are you avoiding writing a certain part of your WIP? What part and why are you hesitating? Lack of creativity? Mental block? Fear of digging deep for emotions? Laziness? #AmWriting #WritingCommunity #WritingPrompts #WriteSky #WritingPrompt #AuthorsLife #WIP
No finales, but I found a good “finally”. Ela is new to magic, and she just doesn’t know the rules that all the actually magical creatures do. #WIPSnips
The #WIPSnips word for June 24th is "finale" (going with the World Cup inspo, this was supposed to be "final" but I made a typo on the graphic and didn't notice until I was uploading it and didn't feel like fixing it lol) #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #WritingPrompts
“Our extremely expensive software product that runs on even more extremely expensive custom hardware can do the work of some—but not quite all—of the unpaid interns, fanfic writers, amateur artists, and beginner computer animators, so that we can amass the income of all of those unpaid humans!”
Stay Writing While the Sun is Shining! Snip the introduction of your main character! Remember to use alt text, and be curious and kind. #SummerSnips
Like the refs and whatever team is playing against the Ottawa Charge, there aren’t a lot of penalties, so I had to go way deeper into my story than any other snip yet. Guys, I think this mayor might not be a good person. #WIPSnips
The #WIPSnips word for June 23rd is "penalty" The words this week were absolutely not inspired by the fact that all that's been on our TV for the last week or so is the World Cup. Nope. #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #WritingPrompts
The average person is kind, but the mean person is not. They are mean instead.
Stay Writing While the Sun is Shining! Welcome to #SummerSnips. Let’s start at the beginning; what’s the (current) opening line of your current WIP? Remember to use alt text, and be curious and kind.
Of the main characters, Rindle won’t be fully mature for another century or two, so not going to be a father within the timeframe of the story (dragons grow very slowly). Ela’s father, Isaac, was a fisherman in the old country but is a homesteader at the edge of the magical forest now.
Tell me more about your #AwesomeCharacters We did it for Mother's Day, now it's Father's Day where I am! Do you have any characters who you consider to be, or will be, fathers? Are they a main character, or a side character? Who are their children? #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #WritingPrompts
I love animals like cats, who are both ruthless predators of things smaller than themselves but are also skittish prey animals to things larger than them. In my story, the same applies to dragons. #SundaySnips
Welcome to #SundaySnips! A once-a-week prompt game for writers hosted by myself and @hookandquillpress.com Societies should be judged on how they treat the most vulnerable people among them. Either we're all equal or nobody is. 🏳️🌈 #WritingCommunity #Writingprompt #Writesky #HQpress
It’s more of a lobby than a lounge, so solidly into *vibes* on this one. From “The Incident in Sixteen”, the plants-in-space engineering disaster story. #WIPSnips
The #WIPSnips word for June 20th is "lounge" #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #WritingPrompts